- no subject
- spelling mistakes
- incorrect or missing punctuation
- missing upper-case letters
- incorrect layout - no paragraphs
- 'flaming' - sending a rude or aggressive e-mail
- inappropriate use of the student mail system
- poor communication through not checking e-mail every day
- inappropriate tone - too informal to send to a member of staff
- using 'text' language
Below is an example of s student who sent a "flaming" email, with inappropriate tone and incorrect punctuation to a professor. This student clearly didn't read the 7 C's of Communication, # 7) Be courteous, nor did this student do a proper audience analysis - the instructor most likely did not respond in favor to the student's request.
When I receive an email in all capitals, I assume the person is yelling at me and therefore, I delete the email without reading it. If it's that important they will yell at me in person or on the phone - I am a tough audience who prefers polite email communication versus people who are too lazy to switch between lower-case and upper-case words.
"To: paul.jones@ABC.ac.uk
Subject: UNFAIR ASSIGNMENT MARK
DR JONES
I AM REALLY ANNOYED WITH THE MARK YOU GAVE MY ASSIGNMENT. I WORKED FOR DAYS ON THAT AND I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU ONLY GAVE IT 58%. I KNOW YOU DON'T LIKE IT WHEN STUDENTS DISAGREE WITH YOUR NARROW WORLD VIEW AND THAT IS WHY YOU GAVE ME A BAD MARK. THIS IS A RUBBISH UNIVERSITY THAT DOES NOTHING TO HELP ITS STUDENTS AND MY DAD SAYS YOU WOULD NOT GET A JOB IN THE REAL WORLD.
I DEMAND THAT YOU GET SOMEONE ELSE TO MARK THIS ESSAY WHO ACTUALLY KNOWS SOMETHING ABOUT THE TOPIC.
ROB HALL"
Subject: UNFAIR ASSIGNMENT MARK
DR JONES
I AM REALLY ANNOYED WITH THE MARK YOU GAVE MY ASSIGNMENT. I WORKED FOR DAYS ON THAT AND I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU ONLY GAVE IT 58%. I KNOW YOU DON'T LIKE IT WHEN STUDENTS DISAGREE WITH YOUR NARROW WORLD VIEW AND THAT IS WHY YOU GAVE ME A BAD MARK. THIS IS A RUBBISH UNIVERSITY THAT DOES NOTHING TO HELP ITS STUDENTS AND MY DAD SAYS YOU WOULD NOT GET A JOB IN THE REAL WORLD.
I DEMAND THAT YOU GET SOMEONE ELSE TO MARK THIS ESSAY WHO ACTUALLY KNOWS SOMETHING ABOUT THE TOPIC.
ROB HALL"
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